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April 10, 2012
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DC-4300
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Date Taken
Jan 1, 2003, 3:39:55 AM
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Ruins by blaithiel Ruins by blaithiel
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I really like this image so I decided to give it a critique.

Vision: the vision is really well I am guessing this was a battle scene back in the day. You have what is left of the building and what looks like fallen soldiers through the image scattered on the ground.

Originality: I have seen many buildings, doors, objects in this kind of manner but not to this point. I don't see many so vivid in dark stark death. It's blunt and to the point and I like that about the image.

Technique: Pretty much perfect! I think you maybe could of made the skeleton corpse on the bottom a little bit more sharper, but you did a nice job of lightly blurring the building in the back. It's not to much so you can see it well but it's added in so it does look like it's caught up in the dust storm.

Impact: It's pretty good but I think it could of had a little something more. I don't know what exactly but it wouldn't hurt to add something to make it pop!

Great image I love your art so keep it up! I hope this critique helps.
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